Hi, my name is Dasha. Today I want to tell you about my sister and her life. Her name is Mary now, she lives in village near our town. We are visit her every hollydays. Mary has cozy house. She so like pets, and has two cats. Her house- so beautiful and anusual, Mary likes painting,and walls of her house covered with pictures. I like my sister, maybe I with my family move to her village in this cute house.
Ошибка мб в одном предложении тк я не оч уверена с оборотами.
Hi, my name is Dasha. Today I want to tell you about my sister and her life. Her name is Mary now, she lives in village near our town. We are visit her every hollydays. Mary has cozy house. She so like pets, and has two cats. Her house- so beautiful and anusual, Mary likes painting,and walls of her house covered with pictures. I like my sister, maybe I with my family move to her village in this cute house.