Задали в шк сочинение по на тему my typical day. проверьте плес. найдите ошибки (если они есть) и проверьте постановку запятых, если не сложно. my typical day. today, i want to tell you about my typical day. actually, my life isn't very active and amazing, but i'll try tell you something interesting. i get up often at half past six, but sometimes, when i want to sleep a little longer, i get up at seven o'clock. in the morning i have a breakfast, make the bed, do my hair, and after that, i go out of my house and go to school. at school, i'm as usual bored, because i have no time to communicate with my friends and a (или the подскажите предлго) breaks between lessons are very short. after school, almost always i have music or english classes. it's interesting and useful for me. i really enjoy it. after classes i go home. when i come home, i often feel exhausted and very hungry. typically i have dinner, and then i get started to do my homework. then, i can't think about something other than sleep. the my essay ending, because now, i'm going to sleep. the end.
I often get up at half past six, but sometimes, when I want to sleep a little longer, I get up at seven o'clock. In the morning I have breakfast, make the bed, do my hair, and after that, I leave home and go to school.
At school I'm usually bored, because I have no time to communicate with my friends and the breaks between lessons are very short.
After school, I almost always have music or English classes. It's interesting and useful for me. I really enjoy it.
After classes I go home. When I come home, I often feel exhausted and very hungry. Typically I have dinner, and then I start to do my homework. Then, I can't think about anything but going to bed.
Now I end my essay because I'm going to bed.
i often get up half past six
i leave from my house
the breaks are very short
i listen music
after classes i go to
i have a dinner
after "and" we don't use then
i start
other than sleeping