Проверьте сочинение на гиа. dear tom, great to hear from you again and i am sorry for not writing for ages. i have been really busy with my exams. let me help you. young people in my country doesn't read as much as old people. as for second question, i believe that traditional books are better than e-books. because e-books have disadvantages. and one of them is that the e-book can get discharged. besides, if you lose your e-book, you will lose all the books that were on it, which you wanted to read. it is great that you have joined a tennis club. do you like playing tennis? when do your tennis lessons begin? where will your training take place? hope to hear from you soon. best wishes, mira
2) "Besides, if you lose your e-book, you will lose all the books that were on it, which you wanted to read" - Я бы сказала "Besides, if you lose your e-book, you will lose all the books that were on it, which you WANT to read".
Всё остальное правильно, молодец!
Удачи на экзамене!