Task 1. proofread the paragraph. find five incorrect pronouns. one example (0) has been done for you. eg.: 0 - they we recently read boom town. they is the story of a girl named amanda. her helped her town grow by starting a pie business. us decided to try the gooseberry pie recipe in the book. mom suggested using blueberries instead. then mom thought there wasn’t enough sugar. him kept adding more. i thought there weren’t enough berries. you piled them so high that there wasn’t enough dough to cover them. then me forgot to turn on the oven. no wonder the pie took so long to bake!
decided to try the gooseberry pie recipe in the book. Mom suggested using
blueberries instead. Then Mom thought there wasn’t enough sugar. (Him) SHE kept
adding more. (I) SHE thought there weren’t enough berries. (You) SHE piled them so high that there wasn’t enough dough to cover them. Then (me) SHE forgot to turn on the oven. No wonder the pie took so long to bake!