Write about one of the best days in your life. use verbs in their past tense forms and the words-'tellers'

The best day of my life was my birthday.My parent tried to do it unforgettable for me and my guests. We celebrated it  in the cafe. I invited my friend from my school and my relatives. I got a lot of presents which I wished to get. I got a new computer and PSP, a lot of discs. books and money. But the most desirable present was a little puppy. My parents gave it to me. The puppy was with a big bow on its nick. It was great! We ate a lot of tasty things. sang. danced and played different games with animator. It was funny! I liked my birthday party very much!